We are introduced to a character named Piggy who is over weight and wears glasses and has asthma also another character named Ralph who had a father who works for the navy. They are stranded on a island because of a atomic bomb which was let of, they got evacuated and the plane must of crashed so that’s how they go on the island. They are all 12 year olds and some from different schools we meet Jack who was leader of the choir back in his school and wants to be leader. We also find out he doesn’t like to be called piggy because in the text it says “I said I didn’t want to be called piggy”.
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September 21, 2016 at 6:04 pm
Adam,
You have clearly understood the events BUT
Be careful not to confuse of with have.
What about those full stops?
What about the creation of a character like this? How should the reader react to Pigy? Why?