It is the year  2099 were there  are not only humans in earth ,there’s now robots trying to take over if we give up.There is a new atmosphere in earth. Hovercrafts flying over you in the sapphire   sky also cars flying on there own like birds busy looking for food.Normally it was a friendly place to be unless the dark over ran you at night.The silver ,robotic ,tech robot’s are filled with tubes but instead of h20 going through the vains of the robot it was actually r20 which was a type of liquid that helps the robot to breath .I have lost control of these amazing creatures and now there used as a weapon against us .The robots hide out is a unpleasant place to be.It is a hotel for micro organism (five stars). People who  go in never come out alive. I lost my family and I won’t lose the world I will dedicate my life for this important mission. Above me are stars which glitter in my eyes like silver shining at the sun.”Are we ready “exclaimed the man with great confidence and bravely .finally we unleash the fury out of the armoured car and run with great velocity to wards the evil robots.at first I was extremely terrified one of our men were injured and almost about to get finished of by the silver tech weapon but at the speed of light i jumped into the way and hit the robot with the spear.The injured man out of the way.

the boy was good so that he would get a watch mark

the student was in trouble unless he behaved

the boy was going to be in detention if  he proved his teacher wrong

It was a bright day in April when winston smiths chuin nuzzled into his breast because of the vile wind.Meanwhile striking 13.after that he slipped throughout the victory mansions door made out of glass.although not quickly enough preventing a swirl of the gritty dust following him!!!!

Yo guys my name is Adam and I’m 11 years old. I’m from London and I go to London nautical. I play ps3 nearly ever day and I love FIFA 13  I literally bang out in the game. I look forward to reading your comments on the work I post here for you to read. Thank you

your sincerely Adam Yahiaoui

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